Given a Level 1 due to it being unfinished.
Good Points
- Lovely sped up shots.
- Good amount of cuts.
- Good guitar and drum shots.
- Good editing.
- like how the pace speeds up towards the end.
- like how it goes with the beat of the song.
- Locations fit the genre.
- Good angles of instruments.
- Creative editing.
- Good lip syncing.
- Editing matches the chaotic feeling.
- Flashing works well.
- Visuals to genre work perfectly together, definite style.
- Good use of different camera angles.
- The pace fit with the music.
- Costumes are well thought out.
- Shadow moves across frame. We are going to re-edit this shot, we thought it looked good with the shadow but others thought it wasn't necessary.
- Some shots are too long. Once we have framed out the whole song we plan on editing some shots shorter and adding different new angles.
- First shot not relevant. We used the wrong part of the clip. We plan to change it and then see if people still find in irrelevant.
- Lip syncing isn't in sync at the beginning. We need to cut the beginning of the shot where he breaths because that's what makes it seem out of sync.
- Some shots are darker the others. We plan on brightening the darker shots. But the band shots are intentionally brighter then the acting.
- A bit repetitive try a different location? We have another location planned and will hopefully be filming there before Rough Cut 3.
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