Rough cut 1

To be able to improve our work before the final cut of our music video we showed the video to a group of students to get their feedback on the rough cut.



Good points:

• the sped up shots look good and fit the genre of the song
• the makeup looks good and works well
• the costume fits with the narrative of the video
• the camera is steady
• the effect used on the shot looks good
• the shots are well framed

Points to improve:

• more shots are the band are needed
• some shots are too long
• see some unintentional shadows in some clips
• music needs to be added
• add all clips to finish the video

• To improve our music video we will film a large number of artist shots and more acting shots so we will have enough to finish the video
• we will also cut the length of some of the shots to keep the audience engaged in the video
• we will remove shots that do not work or have issues such as shadows and replace them with shots that will look good in their place
• we will also add music in the next stage of creating our music video

-Jennifer Armstrong